This is my first notebook entry : self introducing myself

I am a chinese guy. now Currently, I am a student , but I will be graduating in the April next year. I very much like travel and climbing mountains. I have climbed as Hua Guo mountain, Yun Tai mountain, the Ling Yan mountains and so on, but I have not to yet climbed Tai mountain, so I want to climb it in the October this year. Do have any other people who is together whit me want to climb it with me? I have been traveled in Beijing, Suzhou, Shanghai, Yangzhou and so on, and now i study in Zhengjiang, so if you want to travel to Yangzhou or Suzhou, you can tall me and I can make a guide for you. Welcome to China.

Very good. A few things. When you are talking about yourself, you need to use a capital I, not a lowercase i. When you are writing commas, the gap comes after the comma like this, not before the comma ,like this. Also, the ciy names you listed are all one word, and you need to capitalise the Proper names of things. For example, you dont need to capitalise the word city, but if you say Beijing, you need to use a capital letter.

this is my first notebook : a self introduction

i am a Chinese guy, now i am still a student, but i will be graduate in the April next year. I really very like travel and climb mountain climbing, such as for example hua guo mountain , yun tai mountain, ling yan mountains, and so on, but i have not to yet climbed tai(?) mountain, so i want to climb it in the October this year. Is there anyone do have people who would like to climb there together with me is together whit me to climb ? i have been travelling in bei jing, su zhou,shang hai, yang zhou and so on , now i study in zhengjiang, so if you want to travel to yang zhou or su zhou. you can tell me, i can make be a guide for you. Welcome to china.

Capital initial letters for place names, proper nouns.

This is my first notebook entry: self-introduction

I am a chinses Chinese guy. Now I am a student, but I will be gratuationng in the April next year. I very really like traveling and climbing mountains, such as Hua Guo Mountain, Yun Tai Mountain, Ling Yan Mountains and so on, but I have not to climbed Tai Mountain, so I want to climb it in the October this year. Do have people who is together whit me to climb? (Sorry, I don't know what you mean here. Maybe: "Does anyone around want to climb with me?")

I have been travel to (or "I have traveled to...") in Bei Jing, Su Zhou, Shang Hai, Yang Zhou and so on. Now I am studying in Zhengjiang, so if you want to travel to Yang Zhou or Su Zhou, you can tell me. I can make a guide for you. Welcome to China.