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Why don’t we treat the world by using greener types of transportation such as bicycles? Air pollution seems to be a big issue among my problems that governments are trying to solve. As everyone knows, the main cause of this redundant problem comes from combustion engines. Scientists, last year, insisted that just combustion engines alone produced almost 50 percent of the whole carbon dioxide released to our atmosphere. This leads to global warming issue, which can cause devastating disaster all around the world. Many countries have been affected by rapidly changing of environment. The United States of America, for example, in which people thought it’s was the safest place to live, just experienced a lot of deadly tornados, costing hundreds of casualties and trillions of dollars. All of this came from daily vehicles we use to commute, namely cars, buses, airplanes and ships. Moreover, traffic congestion in a big city event more intensifies people’s health. Not just carbon dioxide, dust, and other harmful chemical substances contribute causes of lung disease. Some big cities like Beijing has exceeded numbers of air pollution and people are now suffering with cloudy environment. Therefore, why don’t we treat the world by using greener types of transportation such as bicycles?

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Why don’t we treat/save the world by using green er types of transportation such as bicycles?

 

Let's Save The World with Green Transportation

 

Air pollution seems to be a big issue among my the problems that governments all around the world are trying to solve. As everyone knows, the main cause of this major global redundant problem lies within comes from combustion engines. Scientists, last year, insisted that just combustion engines alone produce produced almost 50 percent of the whole total carbon dioxide released in/to our atmosphere. This leads to global warming issue, which can cause devastating disasters all around the world. Many countries have been affected by rapidly changing of environment. The United States of America, for example, in whichwhere people thought it’s that it was the safest place to live, just experienced a lot of deadly tornados costing hundreds of casualties and trillions of dollars. All of this came from the pollution caused by daily vehicles we use to commute, namely, cars, buses, airplanes and ships. Moreover, traffic congestion in big citieseventmore intensifies people’s health problems. Not just carbon dioxide, but dust and other harmful chemical substances in smoke contribute causes ofto lung diseases. Some big cities like Beijing hashave already exceeded numbers ofthe safe/minimum threshold for air pollution and people there are now suffering with experiencing cloudy environment. Therefore, why don’t we treat/save/improve the world by using green er types of transportation such as bicycles?


The word "green" can be used as an adjective with the meaning 'not damaging to the environment.'

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