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The decisions we make Everyone makes decisions in their lifes eg. what to eat today, which kind of transport to choose, which requirements to fulfil etc. All our lifes are based on making decisions, less or more important. Sometimes only one decision can have a tremendous impact on our lifes, it can change it completely. Some people like being advised what they should do and the others make decisions by themselves. The first group of people regrets that they did so when they realize that their decision was wrong. They also complain about all the exterior factors that they do not have any influence for (economical situation in the world, bad weather etc.) and these factors cause their misfortune, they think. They do not see that the cause of their misfortune is inside them. The easiest way is to get rid of their own responsibilities and transfer it for other people. But the fact is that only we are responsible for our lifes even if other people advise us what to do. Only we, not they, should make decisions in our lifes and bear the responsibility of them.

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The decisions we make

Everyone makes decisions in their life, e.g. what to eat today, which kind of transport to choose, which requirements to fulfill, etc. All our lives are based on making decisions, more or less important. Sometimes only one decision can have a tremendous impact on our lifes, changing it completely. Some people like being advised what they should do and the others make decisions by themselves. The first group of people regrets that they did so when they realize that their decision was wrong. They also complain about all the exterior factors that they do not have any influence over (economical situation in the world, bad weather etc.) and these factors cause their misfortune, they think. They do not see that the cause of their misfortune is inside them. The easiest way is to get rid of their own responsibilities and transfer it for other people. But the fact is that only we are responsible for our lives, even if other people advise us what to do. Only we, not they, should make decisions in our lives and bear the responsibility of them.

 

[Very good.  'Less or more' is correct, but we always say 'more or less'.  Don't ask me why.]

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