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A nice friend
Yesterday,a friend from Australia gave me a name, and for me I feel so happy. he also helped me recording it. He is very nice, and lovely. His voice now sounds seductive to me. now. I must try my best way to studying English, as I really want to chat with him.
Very good! You do have some weakness in your conjunctions, tenses, and punctuation, but otherwise nothing terrible. As they say, love knows no boundaries. I wish you all the best with your new best friend =)
A nice friend
Yesterday,a friend from Australia make made a name for me. I feel so happy. He also helped me recording it.He is very nice and lovely. His voice sounds seductive now. I must try my best way to studying English because i want to chat with him.
Very good!
Note: The term 'seductive' is generally a romantic term. I would not use it to describe someone who is simply a friend. Another more common word would be soft or soothing.
Have fun chatting with your Australian friend! :D
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