Introduction

Hello everyone. My name is Pegah and I'm 20 (years old).
You know, when I wanted to start learning the English language, I found it boring! It was really hard for me to listen to the teacher who was talking in another language that was hardly trying to move and impress us with her body language! At first she was looking like a mute person who was trying to make somebody understand. Her eagerness for teaching was respectable, of course! But after 10 minutes my classmates started to introduce themselves one by one. Imagine, that moment was my turn to introduce myself. What a pitiful moment! :( You know I was full of stress and my brain stopped working! I have no memories from those seconds and I don't know how old I said I was!
After the first section I lost my interest for language learning. I thought there must have been a problem with me because most of the students worked so much better than me in the class.
For several months I was hopeless and empty of any interest for learning. However now I'm so happy because I didn't give up and started to learn. I'm trying to improve my language day by day :)

Introduction

Hello everyone. My name is Pegah and I'm 20.
You know, when I wanted to start learning English, I found it boring! It was really hard for me to listen to the teacher who was talking in the other language and hardly trying to move and impress us with her body language! At first she looked like a mute person who was trying to make somebody understand, and her eagerness for teaching was respectable, of course! But after 10 minutes my classmates started to introduce themselves one by one. Imagining that moment when it was my turn to introduce myself, what an awful moment! :( You know I was full of stress and my brain stopped working! I have no memories from that second and I don't know how old I said I am!
After first section I lost my interest for learning language. I'd think there must have been a problem with me because most of students worked so better than me in the class.
For several month I was hopeless and empty from any interest for learning. But now I'm so happy because I didn't give up and started to learn and to try to improve my language day by day :)

Hope these corrections are useful. Just make sure you are using the right tense each time with the verb. Good luck!

Introduction

Hello everyone. My name is Pegah and I'm 20.
You know, when I wanted to start learning English language, I found it boring! It was really hard for me to listen to the teacher who was talk in the other language and hardly try to move and impress us with her body language! At first she was looks like a mute person who is trying to make somebody understand, and her eagerness for teaching was respectable, of course! But after 10 minutes my classmates start to introduce themselves one by one. imaging that moment was my turn to introduce me what a pity moment! :( You know I was full of stress and my brain stop working! I have no memories from that seconds and I don't know how old I said I am!
After first section I lost my interest for learning language. I'd think there must have been a problem with me because most of students worked so better than me in the class.
For several month I was hopeless and empty from any interest for learning. But now I'm so happy because I didn't give up and started to learn and tried to improve my language day by day :)