My work

Now i am a cadet reporter intern. Every morning i read the newpaper to know inform myself as to what happened yesterday, and it can help my writting skills.
If there is something new, I'll go to conduct some interviews for it. I spend more time ,i am reading journalism books, and I really enjoy the reading. There are twenty seven working partners(?) /fellow cadets(?).We come from different univercity. Today is my third week on the job of wok.
It is a wonderful job. Though i am a trainee now，i will become a formal fully-fledged reporter in the future.

红色－语法或拼法问题

绿色－改正的语法

黄色－用法还可以，不用改正

蓝色－更自然一点的用法

注意空格一般是在标点之后用的，不是在标点以前。

"I"这个词应该不是小的“i”（除非在不正式的场合，那样就不管了）。

My work Job

Now i am a reporter intern Right now I'm (或"Recently I've been") interning to be a reporter (或"doing an internship to become a reporter"). Every morning I read the newpaper to know what happened yesterday the day before. And it can It also helps with my writting skills.
If there is something new ("If I see something new"), i'll I'll go to interview it（不知道什么意思。“访问”, 还是“检查”吧？"investigate it" 或 "research it" 或 "look it up" 或 "check it out" 都可以). More Most of the time (定句), I am reading journalism books (或"I spend most of my time reading journalism books")。I really enjoy reading. There are twen-ty-seven working partnerspeople I work with (或"I have twenty-seven working partners). We come, all from different univercsityies (不是一个大学"university"，而应该是很多"universities"). Today is my third week of work.
It is a wonderful job. Though (现代口语上"Even though"在句子前头更常用) I am still just a trainee，I will become a formal reporter in the future ("eventually"最自然，"someday"也还可以，时间也可以放在短句前面).