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A message to a classmate I registered in an open online course: this is a message to a classmate of mine. I'm writing to ask about her studies. "Hello xxxxxx, how are you? My name is Paola. I see that we are classmates at the same Reading course. How are you doing with your studies? I like the course and I enjoy the reading and the quizzes. I find it harder to join the discussions and to fulfill the assignments because I'm not used to writing in English. I think that I'll start at some point, the sooner the better. How about you? Good day, Paola".

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A message to a classmate

I registered in on an open online course: this is a message to a classmate of mine. I'm writing to ask about her studies.
"Hello xxxxxx, how are you? My name is Paola.
I see that we are classmates at on the same Reading course. How are you doing with your studies?
I like the course and I enjoy the reading and the quizzes. I find it harder to join the discussions and to fulfill the assignments because I'm not used to writing in English. I think that I'll start at some point, the sooner the better. How about you? Good day, Paola".

 

No other correction is necessary.  Ben fatto!

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Hello xxxxxx,

How are you doing? My name is Paola. I saw that we are classmates in the same reading course. I wanted to ask you how you are doing with your studies. I like the course and I enjoy the readings and the quizzes. I find it harder to join in on the discussions and to do the assignments because I'm not used to writing in English. I think that I'll start at some point, the sooner the better. How is everything going for you?

Good day,

Paola

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Looks pretty good to me!
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Ciao Paola - I am new to iTalki, so maybe you know this already - but I see that 'corrections' are sometimes 'opinions' - because there is nothing to correct. For example " I see that we are classmates' is 100% correct and good. Etc. - So please keep that in mind, because your level of English is obviously excellent! greetings from California!

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