at a crossroad
i dont know where i should go to work.in the hometown where could stay with my family or go to another city,200kms away from my home,if i work there, i should be independent by myself.
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At a crossroad
I dont know whether I should go to work in my hometown , where I could stay with my family, or go to another city 200km away from my home. If I work there, I would have to be more independent.
Good piece of work. Some tips I will give you:
* If you use "I" make sure you use a capital letter if it is at the beginning of the sentence or if its an individual word.
* Divide the sentences up using full stops, you can still use some commas but not too many.
Otherwise, excellent
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home town will be your last choice, no matter after how many years.
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if you stay with your family i think it would be better than going to anther city
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