Dear diary
In recent days l have been watching American TV,in order to improve my English. Paiticularly fascinated<The Vampire Diaries>,witch the heroine Elena, she had a similar diary and she daily to record their daily happenings.So more aroused my diary desire.
Now l have a great desire. l would like to take advantage of the summer time this month to lose weight,my weight reduced to 45kg，l wish l could grow taller,can no longer obese,because it is really very painful,and I want to go beyond one I hate girls,any way!
l can't stand it!
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Dear diary,
In recent days l have been watching American TV, in order to improve my English. I'm Particularly fascinated with "The Vampire Diaries", in which the heroine Elena has a similar diary which she uses to record their daily lives. This aroused my desire to keep a diary.
Now l have a great desire. l would like to take advantage of the summer and lose weight, my weight has reduced to 45kg，l wish l could grow taller, I can no longer be fat, because it is really very painful, and I want to go further, I hate girls anyway!
l can't stand it!
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