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I‘m looking forward have dinner with a superwoman A couple days ago, I joined a activity of name is "Having dinner with your idol" that speak up three reasons about why do you like our magzine it come from micro-blog. As to idol is this magzine's boss, a beautiful woman who run her magzine business. I've been concentrating this magzine's develop, it is a new coming free magzine is that provide newest trip tips and articles in Chinese. Anyone want to get it at airport,overseas' book shop, popular shopping mall and so on. I posted three reasons of love it so much and @ three my friends to join this good activity and waiting for some good news for me in near future. Yesterday, I was refreshing my blog, a message poped up write: we selected you as winner of our activity,congratulations! I couldn't believe that is ture and so lucky I'am ! I contected their stuff and thanks for them give me a awesome chance,and then, I 've been waiting this come ture in few days. Now, I'll tell you the three reasons I wrote online. 1.you have expecially angels to report what we want to know in trip. 2.Although as a free magzine, you totally better than payment magzine and your stuff concentrated on it so much. 3. Facing criticism never against or explain useless words, I trust you can make more progress so fast in the future.

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I‘m looking forward have dinner with a superwoman

A couple days ago, I joined a activity with the name "Having dinner with your idol", that speaks about three reasons about why do you like their magzine. It comes from micro-blog.

My idol is this magzine's boss, a beautiful woman who runs her magzine business. I've been concentrating this magzine's develop, it is a new coming free magazine is that provides the newest trip tips and articles in Chinese. Anyone want to can get it at airport, overseas' book shop, popular shopping mall and so on. I posted three reasons why I love it so much and @ three my friends to join this good activity and am waiting for some good news for me in near future.

Yesterday, I was refreshing my blog, a message popped up with the message: we selected you as winner of our activity, congratulations! I couldn't believe that it is true and how lucky I am! I contacted their staff and thanked for them for giving me an awesome chance, and since then, I 've been waiting this come ture in few days. Now I'll tell you the three reasons I wrote online. 1. You have special angels to report what we want to know about a trip. 2. Although it is a free magzine, you are totally better than payment magazines that are paid for and your staff concentrated on it so much. 3. Facing criticism never against or explain useless words[wasn't sure what you meant here], I trust you can make more progress so fast in the future.

 

[I like your enthusiasm.]

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