AII my "bugs" are packed,l am ready to go
l don't go home on this summer holiday , because I have to go to summer camp on July 20, teach children to draw paintings. Yes, I like to draw. Second time in a hurry in the past. sometime happy sometine sad, Today say goodbye to a teacher, she is from Philippines,She is an English teacher, she will back her country, we met one year.she help me a lot ,l want to say thanks for her=).she is my good friend.
Tomorrow l will work in decathlon, which is a French company, you know?to do a part _time job . I work for the department of walking and running motion, work very hard but very happy =) yes, there are many foreigners here. They are fine.
This semester grades is not ideal, but the scholarship should be get no problem, come on! l will go to yunnan next semester, it is a beautiful place, I will draw a lot of pictures.
Today l went to visit many foreign friends, we read bible together, is very good =)
Hope to know more foreign friends, so we can know more culture and their lives.
Thank you, thank you can appear in my life, no matter good and bad time together. I always believe that god gave you the way how can give you what kind of courage and love to do so .
Drew a picture today, do you like? Later maybe not often on this website, because no time. Hope you can email; )
Everything will be past. Bread will be have;)
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All my "bugs" are packed, l am ready to go
l won't go home on this summer holiday because I have to go to summer camp on July 20th to teach children how to draw paintings. Yes, I like to draw. Second time in a hurry in the past. (I'm not sure about this phrase) Sometimes I'm happy, sometimes I'm sad. Today I said goodbye to a teacher who is from Philippines. She is an English teacher and she will go back to her country. We met one year ago and she helped me a lot, so l want to say thank for her for it. =) She is my good friend.
Tomorrow l will work for Decathlon, which is a French company, do you know it? I will do a part-time job and I will work at the walking and running department. of walking and running motion, The work is very hard but very happy. =) yes, There are many foreigners here and they are fine.
This semester grades are not ideal, but the scholarship should not be a get no problem, come on! l will go to Yunnan next semester. It is a beautiful place and I will draw a lot of pictures there.
Today l went to visit many foreign friends. We read bible together and it was very good. =)
I hope to know more foreign friends, so I can know more about their cultures and their lives.
Thank you, thank you can for appearing in my life. No matter if it's a good or a bad time together, I always believe that God gave you the way how to have that kind of courage and love to do so. (I couldn't correct this phrase well, 什么意思？)
I drew a picture today, do you like it? Later maybe, I'm not often on this website, because no I don't have enough time, so later, maybe, I hope you can email me. ;)
Everything will be past. Bread will be have. ;) (I'm note sure about these two phrases)
Tips:
- You can use link linking words to let your text rich and more cohesive.
Ex.: "Today I said goodbye to a teacher. She is from Philippines." - 好
"Today I said goodbye to a teacher who is from Philippines." - 非常好
- 'Thanks' may sound casual. You can also use the verb to thank.
Ex.: "l want to thank her."
- "You know?" can be used in casual texts. The formal way is "Do you know it?"
- "Scholarship": Maybe another word should be better in this case. 这儿 scholarship 是什么意思？
- The word "which" was very well used. Congratulations!
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