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Lately, the life in France sucks! And holidays suck more...
I am not cranky, I am not in a bad mood, but I think holidays suck. Some people might ask "why?", and my answer is really simple. I don't like the holidays, and especially the summer holidays, for one big reason: I am bored. I looked for a job in my city, but I didn't ("couldn't" could also work) find anything. The employers either want me to have a car, or they want me to have experience, which I don't have because they don't ("won't" could also work) give me the opportunity to have it. In France, if you want to get a job, it's really hard. In order to work, you need experience. To have get experience, you need a car. In order to have a car, you need money. And to have money, you need to work. It's a vicious circle cycle. I am not a rich boy and I don't pretend to be the perfect worker, but I'd like them to give me a chance. I deserve it. I recently graduated from a Northern France's University ("a university in northern France"? maybe you could list the specific university, e.g. "I recently graduated from the Université de Lille") in Applied Foreign Languages. Next year, I'll have to find a Master degree ("find a Masters program"? if so, maybe you should say "I'll have to start applying to graduate school" or "start applying for masters degree programs") and without money, you can't keep up ("up" could be optional here) studying.
I still hope to find a job next year, but I know it will be hard. For now, I will keep studying languages like English, German, Italian, Japanese, and Chinese, so I don't lose everything I've studied these last years ("last few years" or "last [insert number, e.g. two, three, four, etc.] years")... Hopefully, I'll improve my skills... Thank you for correcting this small article!
Thank you for writing this article! I'm sorry to hear about your job search and summer break. I feel your pain; it's the same situation for many college graduates in the US. But I wish you the best of luck, and keep writing! Your English is great.
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