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my story of life Each person learns English for some goal and I'm not exception. I learn a forein longuage for my future work. It's a not ordinary job for a woman. I want to be a sailor. I'm not going to write about it in detail, but I just say it isn't physically difficult work. I'm working on the computer on the vessel. Russian marine companies hardly employ women therefor I have to learn English to work. I dislike that other people consider I mustn't do it and I must t stay in and cook, to wash up and do other routine. Why do they think rest of people must adore to do things which they like? You maybe think I'm pessimist but you're confused. I'm just in the bad mood today. )) I consider every person should listen to the heart and no one more because you're yourself only man who would be with you all teh time. I hope knowing people will correct the text ))

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Hello gabriella,

 

I actually didn't understand the last sentence in orange. Please explain.

 

my story of life

Each person learns English for some goal/reason and I'm not an exception. I learn a forein longuage for my future work job. It's a not ordinary traditional job for a woman. I want to be a sailor. I'm not going to write about it in detail, but I let's just say it isn't manual labor physically difficult work. I'm working on the a computer aboard on the vessel. Russian marine companies hardly employ women therefore I have to learn English to work to get hired.
I dislike that other people consider I mustn't do it and tell me to I must t stay in and cook, to wash up and do other routine household chores. Why do they think rest of people must adore to do things which they like? You maybe think I'm a pessimist but you're might be confused. I'm just in a the bad mood today. )) I consider believe every person should listen to their heart and no one more nothing else because you're yourself only man who would be with you all teh time.
I hope knowing people someone will correct the text ))

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My story of life

Each person learns English for some goal and I'm no exception. I'm learning a foreign language for my future work. It's a not ordinary job for a woman. I want to be a sailor. I'm not going to write about it in detail, but I would like to mention that it isn't a physically difficult job. I will be working on the computer on the vessel. Russian marine companies hardly employ any women, therefore I have to learn English to work.

I dislike that other people feel I shouldn't do it and insist that I stay at home to cook, wash and do other household routines. Why do they think everyone else adores to do the things that they like?

You may think that I'm a pessimist but you're wrong. I'm just in the bad mood today! I believe every person should listen to their heart and no one else, because you are yourself and you are living YOUR life, not someone elses. (only man who would be with you all teh time?).

I hope someone will correct this text.

 

 

Congratulations, Gabriela. Go for your dream!

 

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