Notebook Entry

I find 'Notebook' the best section on italki because it allows me to speak my mind and improve my English, especially my writing skills. What I have noticed is that most English native speakers are interested more in 'Answers' and the questions that learners ask. I want people like Jura, Peachey and 雲小泉 to correct notes as well so that learners can benefit from their knowledge, skills and expertise. Will these people be notified that I mentioned them in my note? It is one of Facebook's features: People get notified when someone mentions them in their status.

Other than the small correction in red, everything else was perfect! Well done :)