this sentence is grammatically incorrect?
Love begins with a smile，grows with a kiss，ends with a tear. When you were born，you were crying and everyone around you was smiling. Live your life so that when you die，you're the one smiling and everyone around you is crying.
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this sentence is grammatically incorrect?
Love begins with a smile，grows with a kiss，ends with a tear. When you were born，you were crying and everyone around you was smiling. Live your life so that when you die，you're the one smiling and everyone around you is crying.
It is OK the way you wrote it. I think the last sentence would sound better like this: Live your life so that you will be the one smiling, when you die, and everyone around you will be crying.
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ur Chinese thinking reasult ur Chinese english.
Some say love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, but ends with a tear. The moment when u came into this world, everyone around u were having a big smile except u were crying and had ur brows wrinkled. Live free and be nice. Therefore, in return u can leave with a smile, when u knew ur time is coming. However that would be a great sorrow for ur family and friends.
It's not perfect but could be ur start in reference with.
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