Corrections · 2
14th, July, 2013 Sunday
I ate ramen for dinner with my friends. I loved it!!:D After dinner we played set off fireworks. It was first time of the year for me[1]. We play set off fireworks every summer. I've so funny time[2]!!
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You did really well, just a few small problems. So, we say you "set off" fireworks because they're really just explosives. So, you wouldn't say, "I played bombs." That wouldn't make sense. Saying you "set off" the fireworks just basically means you made them explode.
1. I understood what you meant there, but a more natural way of saying that would be, "It was my first time this year."
2. So you have some problems with this sentence. Without the contraction, you're saying, "I have so funny time!!" Because you're talking about something that happened in the past, you use the past tense of "have" which is "had". On the second half, i'm not sure if you meant to say "fun" or "funny" there (they have slightly different meanings). If you meant "fun" the sentence should probably go like this, "I had such a good time!!" or "I had so much fun!!"
If you meant "funny", then the closest thing would be this, "It was really funny!!"
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