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Todays diary today was saturday However, exatly its am1:47 now its sunday. Whatever I'd like to saturday's diary Today I got up at 12 at noon cause I slept at 6 am last night. I dont know why my sleeping time keep going late when the outside is going bright I feel bad cause my mother always said sleeping late and irregular life style will ruin your health and I completly stand on my moms side and trust her. So I think I need to follow regular life cycle. Anyway therefore I woke up late 12 am and I watched Korean Tv Show named 무한도전(infinite challenge) and 우리결혼했어요 (we got married) . I have been watching 무한도전 before but not 우리결혼했어요. The reason thesedays I start to watch this Is that there is new couple whom I am interested in.. Their name is Tamin and Naeun. As Speak Frankly I am interested in female Naeun hahaha. I feel She is quiet cute. Cause when she is shy. this is exposed easily through like her red cheek or shy smile. After i finished to watch both. I got to know I was stucked in the room and I went to out for going Alkie beach by bike after brief meals. it was 6oclock. Actually i was there before So The way to go there was quite boring. So I tried to go further then Alkie beach. But this choose is starting of hell.From the alkie beach I pointed place where looks curious to me and decided to get there. And usually I think man once decide to do something he have to to. So I barely got to there But the problem was the way to go back my home It was hell I was so hard and long way. Anyway now I am write down this happening in my bed in relaxed mood. and Plus I decided to write down diary here on a daily basis. Maybe It will be the another starting of the hell hahahahha

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Todays diary

today was saturday However, exatly its am1:47 now its sunday.
Whatever I'd like to saturday's diary
Today I got up at 12 at noon cause I slept at 6 am last night. I dont know why my sleeping time keep going late
when the outside is going bright I feel bad cause my mother always said sleeping late and irregular life style will ruin
your health and I completly stand on my moms side and trust her. So I think I need to follow regular life cycle.
Anyway therefore I woke up late 12 am and I watched Korean Tv Show named 무한도전(infinite challenge) and 우리결혼했어요 (we got married) . I have been watching 무한도전 before but not 우리결혼했어요. The reason thesedays I start to watch this Is that there is new couple whom I am interested in.. Their name is Tamin and Naeun. As Speak Frankly I am interested in female Naeun hahaha. I feel She is quiet cute. Cause when she is shy. this is exposed easily through like her red cheek or shy smile.
After i finished to watch both. I got to know I was stucked in the room and I went to out for going Alkie beach by bike after brief meals. it was 6oclock. Actually i was there before So The way to go there was quite boring. So I tried to go further then Alkie beach. But this choose is starting of hell.From the alkie beach I pointed place where looks curious to me and decided to get there. And usually I think man once decide to do something he have to to. So I barely got to there But the problem was the way to go back my home It was hell I was so hard and long way. Anyway now I am write down this happening in my bed in relaxed mood.
and Plus I decided to write down diary here on a daily basis. Maybe It will be the another starting of the hell hahahahha

 

 

 

Today’s Diary (remember to capitalize titles)

Today was Saturday (capitalize the days of the week). However, to be exact, it’s 1:47 am (in English, “am” or A.M. normally comes after the time is given), so now it’s (an apostrophe is needed because this is a combined word ‘it’ and ‘is’. If it were possessive ‘it’ then there would be no apostrophe. This is confusing, I know) Sunday.

Whatever. I’d like to do Saturday’s diary.

Today I got up at 12 at noon(you can say ‘at 12 noon’ [or ‘at 12’ or ‘at noon’] you do not need to write ‘at’ twice for your meaning to be understood) ‘cause I fell asleep (English speakers normally say ‘went to sleep’ or ‘fell asleep’, but ‘slept’ is also okay. I put this in green because it is more of a suggestion^^) at 6 am last night. I don’t know why I keep staying up late. When it’s bright outside I feel bad because my mother always said sleeping late and an irregular lifestyle will ruin your health and I am completely on my mom’s (apostrophe to show possession) side and trust her. So I think I need to have a regular schedule.

Anyway, I woke up late at 12 pm (I think you mean pm since earlier you said it was noon) and I watched Korean TV shows (pluralize ‘show’ since you watched two of them) named무한도전(Infinite Challenge) and 우리결혼했어요 (We Got Married). I have been watching 무한도전but not우리결혼했어요. The reason I started to watch this is because there is a new couple whom I am interested in. Their names are (the verb tense changes from singular be verb ‘is’ to plural ‘are’) Taemin and Naeun. To be honest, I am interested in the female, Naeun hahaha. I feel she is quite cute because she is shy. Her shyness is exposed so easily through her blushing and shy smiles.

After I finished watching both I realized I had been stuck in my room all day and I decided to go out. I went to Alkie beach by bike after a brief meal. It was 6 o’clock. Actually, I’ve been there before, so the way there was quite boring. So I tried to go further than Alkie beach. But this choice was the starting of hell. From Alkie beach I saw a place that looked curious to me and decided to go there. I think that usually, once a man decides to do something, he has to do it. I barely got there, but the real problem was the way back to my home. It was hell. I was tired and it was such a long way back.

Anyway, now I am writing about this event in my bed while in a relaxed mood. I’ve decided to write a diary entry here on a daily basis. Maybe it will be the starting of another hell hahahahha


I really enjoyed reading this entry. I feel sorry for you about your bike ride, but I still had to laugh a little. Good work-this entry was written very well. I am also really impressed with your usage of 'whom'. Most English speakers in the U.S. today do not know how to use this word and rarely use it at all. As far as I can tell, you also used it correctly! I've seen a little of 'We Got Married' but I never have the time to watch it. I look forward to seeing more of your entries here^^

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