A special day~

Today is a special day:D
I happened to visit two amazing websites--one of them is SharedTalk,the other is here! Though I was at home all day sitting by the desk, I chatted to many foreigners! American,Italian,Canadian,Indonesian,Korean,Russian...Never felt the world is so small!
This week I'll have my TOEFL exam. It is my third time....and I still, as always, feel like I'm unprepared....(I should be punished hard..T^T)
Anyway,whether I am prepared or not, life still needs to move on.

Well, Sylva....... I'd say your written English is almost perfect. You have commas in all the right places, which many people miss out. Usually, the title, as in newspaper articles, is written in initial capitals. 

A Special Day~

Today is a special day:D I happened to visit two amazing websites--one of them is SharedTalk,the other is here! Though I was at home all day sitting by the desk, I chatted to many foreigners! American,Italian,Canadian,Indonesian,Korean,Russian...Never felt the world was (is) so small! This week I'll take (have) my TOEFL exam. It is my third time....and I still, as always, feel like I'm unprepared....(I should be punished hard..T^T) Anyway,whether I am prepared or not, life still needs to move on.