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My favourite day My favourite day of the week is Saturday because it’s the first day of the weekend. After five days of hard work I can finally relax a little, but only a little. Why? I can't always enjoy the weekend because my wife often plans some inescapable activities. However, it’s understandable. On Saturdays I usually get up early, at about half past eight, and as always I have a very strong coffee. Afterwards I do my English homework until lunchtime. When I'm comfortable, I have several cups of coffee a day. I also take care of my bonsais and I like to contemplate them with calm. In those pleasant moments I can forget about everything. In spring and summer, I often ride a bike to a nearby town, and sometimes, I tour from 60 to 100 km. If it's a relative's birthday, we go out for lunch, and then we occasionally take my wife’s granddaughters to some mall with games for children, where they have a lot fun. Meanwhile we continue talking and having drinks until the evening. If there is nothing to celebrate, we have lunch at home as usual, and then we spend the afternoon watching movies on TV or reading some good book. In the evening, from time to time, we go out for dinner and we frequently order Chinese food for dinner, but we rarely go out for drinks. As can be seen, we have a homey and quite quiet life.

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My favourite day

My favourite day of the week is Saturday because it’s the first day of the weekend. After five days of hard work I can finally relax a little, but only a little. Why? I can't always enjoy the weekend because my wife often plans some inescapable activities. However, it’s understandable.

On Saturdays I usually get up early, at about half past eight, and as always I have a very strong coffee. Afterwards I do my English homework until lunchtime. When I'm comfortable, I have several cups of coffee a day. I also take care of my bonsais and I like to nurture them with calm. In those pleasant moments I can forget about everything. In spring and summer, I often ride a bike to a nearby town, and sometimes, I tour from 60 to 100 km.

If it's a relative's birthday, we go out for lunch, and then we occasionally take my wife’s granddaughters to some mall with games for children, where they have a lot of fun. Meanwhile we continue talking and having drinks until the evening. If there is nothing to celebrate, we have lunch at home as usual, and then we spend the afternoon watching movies on TV or reading a good book.

In the evening, from time to time, we go out for dinner and we frequently order Chinese food for dinner, but we rarely go out for drinks. As can be seen, we have a homely and quite quiet life.

 

Wow, only some very very small mistakes, virtually perfect. 

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My favourite day

My favourite day of the (a) week is Saturday because it’s the first day of the (a) weekend. After five days of hard work I can finally relax a little, but only a little. Why? I can't always enjoy the weekend because my wife often plans some inescapable activities. However, it’s understandable.

On Saturdays I usually get up early, at about half past eight, and as always I have a very strong coffee. Afterwards I do my English homework until lunchtime. When I'm comfortable, I have several cups of coffee a day. I also take care of my bonsais and I like to contemplate them with calm. In those pleasant moments I can forget about everything. In spring and summer, I often ride a bike to a nearby town, and sometimes, I tour from 60 to 100 km.

If it's a relative's birthday, we go out for lunch, and then we occasionally take my wife’s granddaughters to some mall with games for children, where they have a lot of fun. Meanwhile we continue talking and having drinks until the evening. If there is nothing to celebrate, we have lunch at home as usual, and then we spend the afternoon watching movies on TV or reading some good books.

In the evening, from time to time, we go out for dinner and we frequently order Chinese food for dinner, but we rarely go out for drinks. As can be seen, we have a homey and quite quiet life.

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Muchas gracias por tus palabras, Wayne. Me alegran y me animan mucho a seguir adelante en esta difícil tarea que es aprender inglés. ¡Un fuerte abrazo!
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Estuve sorprendido a ver que alguién le hubiera corregido así que abrí esta pagina par ver las correciones. No estoy de acuerdo con ella. Creo que tu escritura fue bien escrita.
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Impresionante. Está seguro que no es un Estadounidense?...jajaja

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