An exctitng trip
Two years ago ,i made a trip to lijiang ,a city in Yunnan Province.it was an unfrogttable experienc .lijiang is one of the famous old towns in China .Daya old town and Shuhe old town are more famous because they are really beautiful.i went to xulong Snow moutain ,lugu lake and xianggelila,
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An Exctitng Trip
Two years ago I made a trip to Lijiang, which is a city in Yunnan Province. It was an unforgettable experience. Lijiang is one of the famous old towns in China, but Daya old town and Shuhe old town are more famous because they are really beautiful. I went to Yulong Snow Mountain, Lugu Lake and Xianggelila (Shangri-La) County.
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An excitng trip
Two years ago, I made a trip to Lijiang ,a city in Yunnan Province. It was an unforgettable experience. Lijiang is one of the famous old towns in China. Daya old town and Shuhe old town are more famous, because they are really beautiful. I went to Xulong Snow moutain, Lugu lake and Xianggelila.
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