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Ice
This afternoon Alex and I wanted to buy lemon tea and so we asked Brad whether he wanted some, he said if we got him ice with no tea he would be the happiest person in the world..he just said it's for fun and thought why can't we just buy some ice from that shop.when we arrived at the shop I tried to ask the clerk whether they could sell me some ice ,he looked at me and said yes!
I don't have time to correct all of your entry, sorry.
Make sure you are using the proper tense. Since you are telling a story you should use mostly past tense.
Next time, try using quotation marks ("") so that we can know when dialogue stops and starts. This will make is easier for someone to correct the verb conjugations.
Good job!
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