Bye Howard

It is said that Dwight Howard has made his decision to play with Lin. As a Lakers fan, I feel it a little is a pity. But whatever**, Lakers will still be Lakers. Best wishes to Howard and please be careful, it's finally our turn to hack-a-Howard! **

** I didn't correct this because it would be fine in conversation. Just know that it is not usually used when writing, it's more of a slang expression.

** "~" isn't used culturally the same way it is used in Chinese or Japanese. An English speaking person won't know what you mean. You could try, haha :) or :D, but it's better to just leave it out.

Also, put spaces after punctuation, like commas and periods. On the whole it sounds good! Very honest and concise.