Online shopping

One of my friends Alex, who is from American, she wanted to buy some clothes online. I helped her install Wangwang and  apply register for an account with Wangwang and zhifubao so that she can do some online shopping on Taobao. But we have been trying for three hours and still haven't done it because of the terrible internet (connection?) at web . When we were almost will done it, we found out that Alex doesn't have a Chinese ID number ????.......

Great little story. Be careful with your tenses - usually when describing something that has happened in a story form you should use the past tense. Apart from that good effort and keep it up!