A nice day
Yesterday is my birthday,I am twenty-six years old.
we go to 香妍 to celebrated my birthday.
I loved the fruit salad,it's included many kinds fruit,grape.grape fruit.apple.pineapple.drogan fruit.watermelon.mango.litchi.guava.pear....
The dinner was very delicious and I had a good time.
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A Nice Day
Yesterday was my birthday, I am twenty-six years old.
We go went to 香妍 to celebrate my birthday.
I loved the fruit salad, ,it's included contained many kinds fruit; grape, grapefruit, apple, pineapple, dragon fruit, watermelon, mango, leechee, guava and pear.
The dinner was very delicious and I had a good time.
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A nice day
Yesterday was my birthday,I am twenty-six years old.
we went to 香妍 to celebrate my birthday.
I loved the fruit salad,the salad included many kinds of fruit,grape,grape fruit,apple,pineapple,drogan fruit,watermelon,mango,litchi,guava,pear....
The dinner was very delicious and I had a good time.
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A nice day
Yesterday was my birthday. I am twenty-six years old.
We went to 香妍 to celebrated my birthday.
I loved the fruit salad. It had many kinds of fruits: grape.grape fruit.apple.pineapple.dragon fruit.watermelon.mango.lychee.guava.pear....
The dinner was very delicious and I had a good time.
Very good! :)
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wo ye xihuan shala :)
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