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My guitar gently sweeps I was 14 years old when i seriously started playing the guitar. Before, as many Italian guitar players, i was one of my town church guitar boy. It was very boring and i decided to jump to the boat of rock. My teacher was like a Guns and Roses member and teached my a lot of amazing things and growed in me the idea that this instrument wasn't just an hobby but mainly i part of me. After years with long hairs and big speakers something happen and i started listening jazz. I found it really smooth and full of creativity. Therefore my relationship to the played music changed as well as my lifestyle. Currently i don't play with anybody but i had about 8 years of live concerts all around Italy.

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My guitar gently shrieks  (scopa is difficult to translate poetically, but I know what you mean! haha)

I was 14 years old when I seriously started playing the guitar. Before, like many Italian guitar players, I was one of the young guitarists in my town church.
It was very boring and I decided to jump on the boat of Rock Barge. My teacher was once a member of Guns and Roses, and he taught me many amazing things and cultivated in me the idea that this instrument wasn't just a hobby but a major part of me.

After years of long hair and big speakers something happened and I started listening to jazz. I found it really smooth and full of creativity. Therefore my relationship to the played music I played changed along with my lifestyle.

Currently I don't play with anybody but have had about 8 years of live concert experience all thoughout Italy.

Awesome my friend.  I tried to keep some of the verve and flow in your writing without falling for 'textbook' English corrections. :)
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My guitar gently sweeps

I was 14 years old when I seriously started playing the guitar. Before, as is the case with many Italian guitar players, I was one of my town church's guitar boys.

It was very boring and I decided to jump to the boat of rock start playing rock music. My teacher was like a Guns and Roses member and teached my taught me a lot of amazing things and growed grew in me the idea in me that this instrument wasn't just an hobby but mainly i a main part of me.

After years with of having long hairs hair and big speakers something happened and i started listening to jazz. I found it really smooth and full of creativity. Therefore, my relationship to the played music I played changed as well as my lifestyle.

Currently iI don't play with anybody, but i had about 8 years of live concerts all around Italy I played live concerts in Italy for about 8 years. 

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haha and that's the only thing I saw that was really off, everything else is fine. I really don't see why they corrected it haha
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Abi!!! And what is the corrected sentence? :) With "played music" i mean "the music you play" and not "the music you listen to".
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Those corrections seem really wrong.... I didn't see anything wrong with this entry to be completely honest. Maybe a few typos and only one sentence "Therefore my relationship to the played music changed as well as my lifestyle. " but those people are wrong.

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