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Please help me to correct my C.V. My name is Sin-Yao Huang. Since my parents are engaged in trading gold and platinum from my childhood, I have met a lot kind of customers in my growing stage. Therefore, I have learned some abilities such like repairing gold decoration, sales, and communicating with foreign people. I ever attended at the training of a two-man comic show in school and represented school to make performance outside. So, I am a breezy and lively child in my growing way. I majored electric engineering and graduated from I-SHOU University in 2008. However, I was often to be an observer in the other faculty which I was interested in as international trade, psychology and arts so that I didn't have too much experience about work part-time in my campus; nevertheless, I have done some job which like car-washer, sales of Spring-Festival couplets and part-time of student in supercenter. When I retired from army, I have been employed as sales in Sin-Yi Estate which was a totally new challenge and experience for me. It made me grow whether I interacted with people or learned the knowledge of estate. Besides, this job also extended my relationship to various of industry and then made me to contact with those people according to what they were fond. It makes me understand that sale is not immutable and frozen but every case have its right method. I have work in National Communications commission so far. Content of my Job includes examination of the signal platform, home service, responding opinion of telephone, and holding the digital-TV translated activities. In the translated activities, I almost take the position of speaker to explain the relative thing and to lead every activity. I like traveling to the foreign country, reading the inspirational or financial book and doing some exercise such like swimming, playing basketball, body-building…etc. I have confidence that I can do my best to finish all task which director give to, study everything hard, and work harmoniously with my colleague. In the future, I will be able to make extraordinary contributions with continuous improvement. And I am looking forward to becoming an important part of your team. I wish to have a chance to work for your distinguished company and I will work hard with modesty and fidelity.

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My Name is Sin-Yao Huang. As my parents trade gold and platinum I’ve interacted with many different types of people and customers from a young age. This has resulted in me gaining a wide range of skills with regards to communicating and selling, especially to foreign customers.
Whilst in school I took part in a ‘two-man comic show’ performing both internally and externally, allowing me to act as an ambassador for my school, demonstrating my energetic, friendly and also professional personality. I gained my Bachelor’s Degree in Electrical Engineering from SHOU University, graduating in 2008. My interests did not however merely lie in this field, and I often took part in other faculties’ courses, such as International Trade, Psychology and even Art.
After completing my military service I found a job at Sin-Yi Estate, which exposed me to many new challenges and giving me a wide variety of experiences; both in interacting with a vast customer base and with learning specialised Estate related information. I’ve also worked in the National Communications Commission, in which my responsibilities included examining the signal platform, home services and digital television translation activities; the latter of which I often would lead in the explanation of the issue in question.
My hobbies include travelling (both domestically and internationally), reading (fiction and financial journals), swimming, basketball and going to the gym.
I’m confident that I’m able to work well as a team whilst using my initiative to go above and beyond what is expected of me by my line manager. As such, I look forward to making a positive contribution to your business and also growing both professionally and personally as a result.

 

Probably, good to have someone who works in the field your applying for look over it as well haha

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