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Legend There was a young nymph. She liked to go down from the heaven to swim in the warm ocean. Once she saw a handsome young guy at the bank. He was fishing whis his old boat. She wanted to see him again after some days. Curious nymph went closer to him and asked: "Why do you fish every day?" The young guy told her that his mother was ill and he need the money to buy a medicine. He sold fish at the fair Nymph wanted to help the sailor and she sent him a lot of fish. The guy bought the expensive medicine. He told his mother about the young girl. His mother sent him to marry the nymph. The young nymph was in love with the guy so she said "yes". They had a son and the sailor's family was happy. Heavens king heard that history and said to return nymph to the heavens and to close her in the tower. Tears of the nymph fell down at the ocean in open shells and turned into pearls. The sailor came to place where he first met his beloved. He jumped into the ocean and saw a beautiful view. There were thousant pearls on the ocean floor. He heard his nymph' voice "My love, I can't come back to you. This sparkling pearls are my tears. Take them and they help you to care about our son". Love has no boundaries.

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There was a young nymph. She liked to go down from the heavens to swim in the warm ocean. Once she saw a handsome young guy at the bank. He was fishing whis in his old boat. She wanted to see him again after some days. The Curious nymph went closer to him and asked: "Why do you fish every day?" The young guy told her that his mother was ill and he needed the money to buy a medicine. He sold fish at the fair
The Nymph wanted to help the sailor and she sent him a lot of fish. The guy bought the expensive medicine. He told his mother about the young girl. His mother sent him to marry the nymph. The young nymph was in love with the guy so she said "yes".
They had a son and the sailor's family was happy. Heavens king heard that history and said to return nymph to the heavens and to close her in the tower. Tears of the nymph fell down at the ocean in open shells and turned into pearls.
The sailor came to the place where he first met his beloved. He jumped into the ocean and saw a beautiful view. There were thousands of pearls on the ocean floor. He heard his nymph's voice "My love, I can't come back to you. This sparkling pearls are my tears. Take them and they will help you to care about for our son". Love has no boundaries.

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Your post is like a fable (басня), and you wrote it very well. However, the word "guy" is much too informal and unpretty for a fable. Use one of these, which are "prettier": "young man"; "lad". And if the young man is no more than about 20 years old: "youth". "Once she saw a handsome young man" or "The young lad told her that...." "The youth bought the ..."

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