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Gulangyu Islet(2) When we arrived XIAMEN,we were so hungry,But we must took a bus to the next street to have our dinner,There are lots of TW snacks,so delicious,when we were full,we must ferry to Gulangyu Islet,At night the sea and the sky is very beautiful,The sea breeze is very cool.i really like it!We arrived Gulangyu Islet,have someone to pick us up to the hotel,Back to hotel,we were so tired,We took a bath,tidy up thing and have a rest,Early in the morning,We went for a walk,and start our second day in Gulangyu Islet! (Have a nice day! )

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Gulangyu Islet(2)

When we arrived in XIAMEN,we were so hungry,Bbut we must took had to take a bus to the next street to have our dinner,.There are were lots of TW snacks, that were so delicious.wWhen we were full,we must took a ferry to Gulangyu Islet,.At night, the sea and the sky is was very beautiful,.The sea breeze is was very cool. i I really liked it! We arrived in Gulangyu Islet, have and had someone to pick us up take us to the hotel,Back to hotel, take us to and from the hotel. wWe were so tired,We so we took a bath,tidy tidied up thing and have a rest, rested. Early in the next morning,Wwe went for a walk, and started our second day in Gulangyu Islet!

(Have a nice day! )

 

Very good job! ^.^  Remember to us a period (.) at the end of a sentence instead of a comma (,).

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