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Today Today was a funny day. My friends came to my house and we watched teen wolf. They are twins, and they are very cool. My father gets sick and i guess his sickness is affecting me. I can't stop sneeze and i'm with cold. My class starts on Monday, and this makes me feel worst. I have to read a book called: '' Capitães de areia'' for Monday and i don't started yet. i'm worry about that, because my mom doesn't bought the book.

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Today was a funny day.too
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Today

Today was a funny day. My friends came to my house and we watched Teen Wolf. They are twins and they are very cool. My father gets sick and I guess his sickness is affecting me. I can't stop sneeze sneezing and i'm with I have a cold. My class starts on Monday, and this makes me feel worst worse. I have to read a book called: ''Capitães de areia'' for Monday and i don't I haven't started yet. i'm worry I'm worried about that, because my mom doesn't hasn't bought the book.

 

Teen Wolf and I are capitalized because they are a proper noun. 

No comma is neccessary after the conjunction "and" in the second sentence. 

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