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Gulangyu Islet(1) Two months ago,Me and my best friend went to the Gulangyu Islet together,We start to make plans in March,Departed in April 8,the weather is too bad,It's a raining day,Hasn't got on the bus of our shoes are wet through,This is affecting our mood,That's nothing,Along the way we are pray,I hope is does not rain in Gulangyu Islet,Maybe God hear our prayer,Its no raining in Gulangyu Islet,It's a sunny day,And our way back the rain again,how lucky we are!

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Gulangyu Islet(1)

Two months ago,Me and my best friend my best friend and I went to the Gulangyu Islet together so we started to make plans in during March. We departed in on April 8th but the weather is too was very bad. It's It was a raining day and Hasn't before we got on the bus, of our shoes are were wet through,This which is affecting affected our mood.That's This was nothing, along the way we are prayed I hope hoping is it does not rain in Gulangyu Islet and maybe God heard our prayer. And Its there was really no raining rain in Gulangyu Islet, It's it was a sunny day and then on our way back the it rained again, how lucky we are!

 

 

 

 

 

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This is a pleasant journey,And i really love your hometown,Gulangyu is comfortable and XIAMEN some place is beautiful!
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OMG.you should call me when you chilling at my hometown :). rainning all day is suck,but XIAMEN is a really nice place to visti with though, hope you enjoy sweet!

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