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The Power of Being Alone
There is a movie called "Tokyo Biyori", which has a scene that makes me wondering in a long time reflect. when A man saw his wife walking alone in the street; suddenly he was shocked by her quiet appearance. At that time, I thought his shock stemmed from (was due to) the discovery that his woman was also pleasant and contented without his company.
Yet today, a poem gave me a new perspective:A person stands on the corner waiting for nobody,that is a kind of strength in itself.
One day I was chatting with a male friend,he said,“ Whenever I go out to eat alone,I'm always telling the waiter that there are two people dining. Then, if any waiter asks me by the time the food arrives, I could use the explanation that my friend can't come. ”
So, I asked why he had such a crankery (I don't know this word. Is it British?),he spoke hesitatingly,“ It's very strange to eat alone!”
I will bring a book when I do my hair, doing things like reading to escape from the other's curiosity. When I'm alone, I don't want to be disturbed, I don't even want to face myself. Therefore, I devote all my energy and my mind to another world.
Maybe getting along with oneself is the most difficult thing. If not in our own apartments, sensitive and nervous as a left- behind little beast,we dare not become(?) close to anyone and don't want to be closed to. (you are missing an object here).
A book or a pair of sunglasses, just admit it,we use such masks to prevent others from looking through , becoming close, or hurting. SO you need to accompany (this is not the word you're looking for, this means to go along with someone or something),hoping to deal with all the other time that...something.
I used to be afraid of being alone, envying those women who seemed to have the power to do so .In fact, I don't need to be envious. The spirits of these women are very simple: Don't wait for anybody, also do not be dependent on anyone. Without props, isolate yourself so that you aren't isolating any possibilities. When you are not afraid of being in a daze, then it is more easier to focus on your spiritual world.
Talisman of them, is quiet, is the power of casual and hard to control.
Solitude is the casual talisman of power, and (but) hard to control.
Jane,
Great work! I enjoyed your introspection. Parts highlighted in orange are words or phrases that I think are mistranslated or are missing something grammatically. They do not work in English. Try re-writing them.
Keep it up!
Erin
The Power Of Being Alone
There is a movie called "Tokyo Biyori", which has a scene that makes me wondering in a long time—— when a man saw his wife walking alone in the street,suddenly he was shocked, by her quiet appearance. At that time, I thought his shock coming from the discovery that his wife was also pleasant and contented without his company.
Yet today a poem gives me a new perspective:a person stand on the corner waiting for nobody,that is a kind of strength in itself.
One day I was chatting with a male friend,he said:“ whenever I go out to eat alone,I'm always telling the waiter that there are two persons. Then, if any waiter ask me by the time the food arrived, I could use the explanation——my friend can't come. ” So I asked why he had such a crankery,he spoke hesitatingly“ it's very strange to eat alone!”
I will bring a book when I do my hair. Doing things like reading to escape from the other's curiosity. When I'm alone, I don't want to be disturbed, even, I don't want to face myself. Therefore I devote all my energy and mind to another world.
Maybe getting along with oneself is the most difficult thing. If not in our own apartments, sensitive and nervous as a left- behind little beast,we dare not close to anyone and don't want to be closed to.
A book or a pair of sunglasses, just admit it,we use such masks to prevent others from looking through , closing to or hurting. SO you need to accompany,hoping to deal with all the other time.
I used to be afraid of being alone, envying those women who seemed to have the power .In fact, I don't need to envy. The spirit of these women are very simple: Don't wait for anybody, also do not need anyone: Without props isolate yourself so that you aren't isolate any possibility. When it is not afraid of in a daze, there is more easier to focus on your spiritual world.
Talisman of them, is quiet, is the power of casual and hard to control.
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