Top position

Good afternoon..(We do not say good noon. From 12pm onwards, you should just say good afternoon) I 'm a student.. i I love to do work hard.. i I want to be on in the top level band in my college..
i I want to be an honours student..
The thing is that i I do hard work hard,  but i don't b I'm not able to come on make the top position.
oOne thing i I do know is that something is lack in ME.. I'm lacking something. iI'm unable to identyfy identify my weekness..
oOnly one year is remaining of my graduation field before I graduate. that i I want to be on the top position student.. :))

"IF THERE IS ANY MISTAKE IN MY NOTEBOOK THEN PLS CORRECT
ND SUGGEST ME HOW TO RECOGNISE MYSELF" :) If there are any mistakes in my notebook please correct them, and suggest how I can identify my weakness.

Some things to remember when writing in English: The pronoun I is always a capital letter, I am, I'm, etc. We only use one full stop after a sentence, not two. A sentence must start with a capital letter. Writing in capital letters, as you did at the end, esp online is considered shouting and is very rude.