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My family My name is Kristy,and i have a lovely and warm family,Now i live in Shenzhen and i love this city,My family all is here,I am a single-parent families,My Mother is a strict mother,But she loves us so much,and i have three sisters and one brother,my eldest sister has been married,and elder sister is ready to get married in next year,Another sister and brother and I are single,My eldest sister have a daughter,she so cute,she is 1year old,and she really like music,She heard the music she will dance, we often have family day,that is a jolly time,And this time is always too quickly,and this mean happy moments is too fast!

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My family

My name is Kristy,and I have a lovely and warm family,Now. I live in Shenzhen and I love the city. My family is all here. I am from a single-parent family. My mother is a strict mother, but she loves us so much, and. I have three sisters and one brother, my eldest sister has been is married, and my second elder sister is ready about to get married in next year, Another whereas my other sister, and brother and I are still single. My eldest sister have has a daughter, she's so cute, and she is just 1 a year old, and. She really likes music, whenever she heard hears the music she will would dance. We often have family days that is a jolly time.,And this Such times is are always too quickly quick.,and this mean meaning happy moments is are too fast!

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