English test

Hi! I'm sophia and I'm 24. I would like to learn how to speak and write English fluently... Sometimes I watch movies in English but I don't think it's enough. I fell it's better for me to interact with an English speaking person who maybe wants to learn French or Italian :D. 

Let me know if you're interested!

English test

Hi! My name is Sophia and I'm 24 years old. I would like to speak and write English very well.

Sometimes I watch movies in English but I think it's not enough.

It's better for me to have a conversation with an English speaking person who may want to learn French or Italian :D

Please let me know if you're interested!

english English test

Hi! i'm My name is Sophia and i'm I'm 24 years old. and i would like to speak and write english very well...  I would like to learn how to speak and write English well. Sometimes I watch movies in English but i think it's not enough but I do not think it is enough. it's It would be better for me to discuss talk with an English speaker who wants to learn the French or Italian language.
Tell me if you're interested!

The things crossed out is what you sgould get rid of and the highlighted areas are what I changed. I think that watching movies in another language is a good idea, especially when you want to hear how the words are used/ pronouced.