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Sunset I was born in a little town of Hebei province, and our town is in plains. I haven't seen mountains and rivers when I was young. But when I was a little girl, I liked to go to the housetop to see the sunset, because, in the beautiful sunset, I could see mountains' shape far far away, which made me mad with joy. And when I was young, I only saw a river, which is called city moat, it only has water during summer. But I now live in Hangzhou, I can see mountains as long as I look up around, I can see all kinds of waters named rivers, lakes, and seas. Only the sunset is the same with the one I saw in my hometown when I was young, it makes me calm down.

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Sunset

I was born in a little town of Hebei province, and our town is in the  plains. I did not  seen mountains and rivers when I was young. But when I was a little girl, I liked to go to the housetop to see the sunset, because, in the beautiful sunset, I could see mountains' shape far far away, which made me mad with joy. And when I was young, I only saw a river, which is called city moat, it only has water during summer. But I now live in Hangzhou, I can see mountains as long as I look  around, I can see all kinds of waters named rivers, lakes, and seas.
Only the sunset is the same with the one I saw in my hometown when I was young, it makes me calm down.

 

   Hello Yaya.   Very colorful and thorough  account of your childhood and current imagery.

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@Tom 通常来说 她叫 West Lake
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The xihu lake is very beautiful, i have been there this year earily. I got the idea that could live in hangzhou the rest of my time

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