Where I see myself in 10 years’ time
Ten years’ time is a long way away, so it’s hard to do a suitable prediction. Anyway I really enjoy my work and I am ambitious. I want build up a career of an excellent orthopaedic consultant, with wide knowledge in the orthopaedic field and confident with a great number of different procedures. At the same time I will have lower limb arthroplasty as my special field of interest in which I will provide to my patients the best treatment. It is a challenging matter and it’s required hardworking and the strongest commitment. I think have both qualities and the right motivation, too.
This field provides also interesting issues for research projects. My ambition is to give my personal contribute to the international literature about the issues of my interest. I have already published an article in an Italian journal, but I want to do better and I believe I can if in the suitable environment. For these purposes working in a hospital linked to a University would be the best thing to do. The presence of students and junior doctors is very important, they yield new ideas and induce to improve one’s teaching skills, too.
Finally I see myself in 10 years time being part of a team committed to the excellence, in an open-minded environment looking forward to the new frontiers of medicine. My role will be to stimulate further this commitment always putting the patient needs to the centre of our work.
Do you think I am ambitious enough? :-)
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Where I see myself in 10 years’ time
Ten years’ time is a long way away, so it’s hard to do make a suitable prediction. Anyway I really enjoy my work and I am ambitious. I want to build up a career of as an excellent orthopaedic consultant, with wide knowledge in the field of orthopaedics and confidence with in a great number of different procedures. At the same time I will have lower limb arthroplasty as my special field of interest in which I will provide to my patients the best treatment. It is a challenging matter proposition and it’s required it will require hard work and the strongest commitment. I think have both qualities and the right motivation, too.
This field also provides also interesting issues topics for research projects. My ambition is to give make my own personal contribution to the international literature about in the issues of my interest my area of interest/expertise. I have already published an article in an Italian journal, but I want to do better than that and I believe I can if I find myself in the a suitable environment. For these purposes working in a hospital linked to a university would be the best thing to do. The presence of students and junior doctors is very important, as they yield new ideas and induce others to improve one’s their teaching skills, too.
Finally I see myself in 10 years time being part of a team committed to the excellence, in an open-minded environment looking forward to toward the new frontiers of medicine. My role will be to stimulate further stimulate this commitment, always putting the patient's needs to at the centre of our work.
Do you think I am ambitious enough? :-)
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This is very well done. I am not able to edit, so here are some suggestions: “my personal contribution”—in ingleze, “contribute” è verbo.
“if in a suitable environment”—I articoli sono difficili. Anche “committed to excellence”
“bring new ideas and an incentive to improve one’s teaching skills.”. Your sentence was good, but this is more like a native speaker might say. “induce” implies that you are reluctant. “incentive” means more that you want to do something.
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