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离别就像被撕坏的书本
只剩下了无数如小翅膀般颤抖的白张纸
在碎片当中找不到开头,看不到结尾
我愿将已破碎的爱情折成几百只纸鹤
让它们飞出城市的铁笼子
飞出我的心
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Nice!
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继续写微诗
离别就像被撕坏的书本
只剩下了无数小翅膀般颤抖的白纸
在碎片当中找不到开头,看不到结尾
我愿将已破碎的爱情折成几百只纸鹤
让它们飞出城市的铁笼子
飞出我的心
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不错不错:)再接再厉哈!
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妙
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