Search from various English teachers...
China flagVIVIAN
I free a little trie.= = Today was a busy day. In the morning,when i get ready for work ,it rained suddenly.i have to went home for an umbrella.The episode should me was nearly late for job. then i hard work in the all day. so ,i am tried,and i hope it's well be better in tomorrow.

Corrections · 6

0

 

Today was a busy day.
In the morning, after i got ready for  a work ,it suddenly started to rain. I had to go home for taking an  umbrella.This  episode what happend to me caused that I was nearly late for a work.
Then I worked hard all day.
So ,now I am tried and I hope for better tomorrow.

0

I free a little trie.= =

Today was a busy day.
In the morning,when i get ready for work ,it rained suddenly.i have to went home for an umbrella.The episode should me was nearly late for job.
then i hard work in the all day.
so ,i am tried,and i hope it's well be better in tomorrow.

 

   

---  Hello Vivian. How are you? 

 

 

 (a) I feel a little tired.

 

(b)   Capitalize   I when referring to yourself. It is a pronoun.

 

(c)   No commas needed in  sentence   3 about "In the morning...etc."

 

(d) I had to go home   +   The episode (rain) almost made me late for work.

 

(e) Now I am "tired".

 

   Nice effort my friend. Your idea flow in a logical sequence. Minor spelling errors which do not matter so much.   Keep writing  Vivian.   Your  efforts will produce great rewards.---Warm Regards,  Bruce R. Bain

0

I feel a little tired

Today was a busy day.

In the morning when getting ready for work, it suddenly started raining. I had to go home for an umbrella. This event nearly made me arrive late for work. Then I was working hard for the whole day.

So I'm tired and hope tomorrow will be a better day.

 

Well done. It's very clear what you want to write. English grammar is difficult...

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today