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hi nice to see you again hi ,everybody,how are you ?last a few days ,i was went home ,it is far away from my school,and at my home ,there was no computer,so ,i can't on internet,the most important is that i can't talk with you ,next ,i will go on study with you .hope you can help me point the mistake out.thanks!

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Hi, nice to see  you again. 

 

Hi everybody, how are you?  In the last few days I went home.  It is far away from my school and there is no computer at my home, so I can't get on the internet.  Most importantly, I can't talk with you.  Next, I will go and study.  I hope you can help me point the mistakes out.  Thanks!

 

hHi, nice to see you again.

hHi, everybody, how are you? In the last a few days ,i was went home. ,iIt is far away from my school,and at my home ,there is was no computer,so ,i I can't get on the internet,.  the mMost importantly is that i I can't talk with you. ,nNext ,i I will go on study with you (I don't understand what you're saying in this sentence).  I hope you can help me point the mistakes out.  tThanks!

Remember:

 

1.) When you talk about yourself using "I" the "I" is always capitalized.  You won't write "i like to eat" you'll write "I like to eat".  

2.  After the full stop ---> "."  There are two spaces.  Example:  "I like to eat ice cream.  What about you?" 

 

Good job :-)

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Thank you ,l will further improve my written skill.Thank you for your help

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