About the war

I saw a viedo about the war today, the viedo comes from Britain's Got Talent. It shocks my heart.
It tells a story about the life of a couple. The two young people were fall in love with each other. They traveled together and laughed together. Everyday's screen was becoming bright, everywhere air was becoming sweet and then they got married. They had a baby one year later. Seems a happy ending would come, but it did not. Happiness is always like a star. One day, a doom knocked their door. The man had to join the army. The hero gave his live at the end. His remains were sent back to his country.
Yes, the couple were reunited finally. The woman came to the cemetery with their daughter. The girl sent a flower to his father she never hugged and would never hug.
I am a medical student, so I comprehend the life how fragile life is. I wish the life can be peaceful all over the world. Just like the song sings, ‘You and me, from one world, we are family'.

PS: the viedo showed on 2013-05-08 if you want to watch it ^ ^

[Very good.  You need to work on tenses.]