June 28,2013
Today I went to Subway and I try to order what i want to eat ? I choose the roaster beef then I choose White bread and American cheese and Lettuce/Tomato/Cucumber/Red Onions and the sauce I choose honey mustard and hot spicy then after I finish order.
In today class I use Phrase verbs try write a sentence:
I come across an old man bring in the road, I want to get rid o man but I have a date with my friends so I put off my date one hour,finally i showed up 10 minutes late.
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June 28,2013
Today I went to Subway and I try (tried) to order what i (I) want (wanted) to eat. (?) I choose (chose) the roaster (roast) beef then I choose (chose) White bread, and American cheese, and Lettuce/Tomato/Cucumber/Red Onions. and the sauce I choose honey mustard and hot spicy then after I finish order. - (For the sauce, I chose honey mustard and hot & spicy, which completed my order, or simply, I chose honey mustard and hot & spicy for the sauce.
In today (today's) class I use (used) Phrase verbs try write (to try and write) a sentence:
I come across an old man bring in the road - confusing, I want to get rid o man (of the man) but I have a date with my friends so I put off my date one hour. finally i showed up 10 minutes late. - I arrived, or showed up ten minutes late. - This part is unclear. If you put off the date with your friends for one hour, then wouldn't you arrive an hour late (instead of showing up 10 minutes late)?
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