hHurt eExpo

We know the expo is hold held in sShanhai. every people Everyone in China want to visit. So many tours are going to sShanghai for to visit the expo. But, I am ,for a tour guide. I hate the expo because the expo let forces my working time to be more than 15 hours one a day. But, my company give us only 150 yuan inclouding meals a day and cars.
Maybe, my mind is bad thoughts are negative because lots of people do this. But, I think this is exportion exploitation. I'm unhappy for about expo tours.
Than,  Then, does our country not have a good policy for guides? I hope it will be better or, I will do anything else instead.


Ok, Wendy, this is great.
Hurt Expo, or as also suggested Expo of pain both work well
Spaces go after commas.
Don't need a comma after "we know"
In English we use a full stop for the end of a sentence & that is usually one idea. In Chinese it seems natural to go
Many native speakers also use too many commas in writing.
We know the expo is hold held in sShanhai. every people in China want to visit,So many tours are going
But, sorry, English needs separate sentences.
"I hate the expo because the expo" works best as one sentence without commas.
I hate the expo because the it forces my working time to be more than 15 hours a day
I hate the expo because the it forces my working time to be more than 15 hours each day
I hate the expo because the it forces me to work more than 15 hours a day -- most natural, maybe

blah because blah    --- will not need commas round "because"

exportion exploitation is what you mean, I think. You are bing exploited.

"my mind id bad" it tricky. Maybe "my thoughts are negative" or "feelings are inapporpriate".

I'm unhappy for about expo tours.
I'm unhappy for with expo tours.

"do any other thing" try "anything else" or "any other job", or "something else".

I didn't quite get " Maybe, my mind is bad thoughts are negative because lots of people do this."
The connection between bad & lots of people was not so clear.
Maybe, my  thoughts are out of step because lots of people do this.
Maybe, my  thoughts are inappropriate because lots of people do this.
This could mean that other people accept these conditions. Is that you meaning


Wendy, a great piece. Afraid that you have lost this one though. So many want to see wonderful Shanghai & the Expo that it will remain an expo of pain for you.

hurt expo  (/Expo pain)

We know, the Expo is hold held in Shanghai, everyone people in China wants to visit. So many tours are going to Shanghai for to visit the Expo... but, I am ,for a tour guide, I hate the Expo, because ,the Expo let made (/makes) my working time (/lets /let my working time be) more than 15 hours one day ... But, my company gives us only 150 yuan inclouding all meals a day and transfer (/transportation) cars,,,

Maybe, my mind is bad ,because, lots of people do this. But ,I think ,this is exportion... I'm unhappy for (/because of) Expo tours...

Than Then, does our country ,(not) have a good policy? For guides... I hope, it will be better...or, I will do any other thing (/job)....