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Today I read some article which write about the business man, it make me know how to them take a lot of money and the difficulty they got on their way. I also want to take a lot of money but my effort is still small, I have to study hard to make my dream is true.
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Keep trying
Today I read some article which write about a business man that informed me how they made e a lot of money and the difficulty they had on their way. I also want to make a lot of money but my effort is still small, I have to study hard to make my dream come true.
[Good work. We talk of making (earning) money. To take money implies stealing and I'm sure that's not what you meant.]
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Read about a self-made man (Bernard matthews) ^^
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