The night is getting more and more dark
Now,i am become a graduate,I will work at north of China after four years' study at university,I feel very excited,because I can control my future,and build belong to my own family.Maybe the road will be crowded of different obstacle,but I have a lot of confidence to defeat it,James Cameron said"Fail is an option,but fear is not",I appreciate it.
now,the night is getting more and more dark in China,but I think my future will become more and more bright.
(the road is one of my school)
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The night is getting more and darker
Now, I am become a graduate, and I will work at north of China after four years studying at university.
I feel very excited because I can control my future, and build belong to my own family.
Maybe the road will be crowded of different obstacle, but I have a lot of confidence to defeat it.
James Cameron said "Fail is an option, but fear is not". I appreciate it.
Now, the night is getting more and more dark in China, but I think my future will become more and more bright.
(The road is one of my schools)
[I corrected your text in Word 2010. OK?]
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:)I agree with what you said.
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People who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want,and if they cannot find them,make them. PS:beautiful leaves=-=..
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