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天气很不舒服 今天下大雨了。又闷又潮湿。我不喜欢这样的天气. 真不舒服!

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天气不能说“成很不舒服”,应该是今天的天气不好让我感觉到不舒服 ok
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天气很不舒服

今天下大雨了。又闷又潮湿。我不喜欢这样的天气. 真不舒服!

 

注意用中文的标点符号。

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可以尝试写篇幅长一点作文
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“今天下大雨了”后面用“,”会比较好。 ^^
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谢谢

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