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A trip to Shuzhou
Today my father told me that he would go to Suzhou to transport some goods.I am interested in outside place so I offered to go with him .He agreed.
On the way to Suzhou,we were talking abot new things beside the road.The most amuseing thing was I saw the
‘the big boxer shorts‘.In fact ,it is named the gate of orient.When Is saw it ,I burst out laughing at once.Because I have went through some news about it on the Interent.I was astonish by it's appearance.The goverment intend to improve the city with a new landmark.Obvious,they didn't think about the shape.Besides,I visited a lot of view in Suzhou.It's a beautiful city and have a long history.There is an old saying in China,up above there is Paradise, down here there are Suzhou and Hangzhou.
It was an unforgettable traval.And I had a good time.
it is my first compision ,please give me some encouragement.
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