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Yesterday Hello gentlemen and ladies, I am going to talk to you a little bit about what I did yesterday. Let's see. My day started yesterday with a big smile in my face because my family and I got up with a good health. I brushed my teeth and after I do that I get ready to eat my breakfast. When I was about to finish of eat my breakfast, my mom arrived to my side and she stayed by me with a big dish of soup, at this moment, when I saw her to my side, I was scared because I was very full. I don't would be able to eat any more. I tried to be more smart than her and I started to eat very slow the little rice that was into my dish, I though myself: "yup, I won, I am not going to eat that soup" but anyways, at the end I finished up eating that dish with soup because she remained there. I was a little upset with her but it doesn't matter now. Gracias por los comentarios

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Yesterday

Hello gentlemen and ladies (usually people write 'ladies and gentlemen'), I am going to talk to you a little bit about what I did yesterday. Let's see. My day started yesterday with a big smile in on my face because my family and I got woke up with a in good health. I brushed my teeth, and after I do that, I got ready to eat my breakfast. When I was about to finish of eating my breakfast, my mom arrived came to my side and she stayed by served me with a big dish of soup. At this moment, when I saw her to at my side, I was scared because I was already very full. I don't didn't think I would be able to eat any more. I tried to be more smart than outsmart her and I started to eat very slowly the little rice that was into in my dish. I thought to myself: "yup, I won, I am not going to eat that soup" but anyways, at the end I finished ended up eating that dish with of soup because she remained there. I was a little upset with her but it doesn't matter now.

Gracias por los comentarios

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Yesterday

Hello gentlemen and ladies, I am going to talk to you a little bit about what I did yesterday. Let's see. My day started yesterday I started my day with a big smile in on my face because my family and I got up with a woke up in good health. I brushed my teeth and after I do that I get then I got ready to eat my breakfast. When I was about to finish of eat my breakfast, my mom arrived to my side and she stayed by me with walked up to me with a big dish bowl of soup, at this moment, when I saw her to my side, I was got scared because I was very full. I don't didn't think I would be able to eat any more. I tried to be more smarter than her and I started to eat very slow the little rice that was into my dish very slowly, I thought to myself: "yup, I won, I am not going to eat that soup" but anyways, at in the end I finished ended up eating that dish with bowl of soup because she remained stayed there. I was a little upset with her but it doesn't matter now.

Good job, David!

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Thanks very much Janice.. :)
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Hello David. Y pu did à Nice job here. Corrections: ...smile on my face With good health ...after I did that I got ready ...about to finish eating ...at my side ...in my dish ...I couldn't eat anymore ...smarter than her ...I thought to myself ...I ended up eating the soup because she remained/stayed there (remained is correct, but it sounds more formal)

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