First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am sherry.I want to learn English well and practise my English speaking,so that I can communicate with most foreigners,because most of them speak English.And

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am sherry.I want to learn English well and practise my English speaking,so that I can communicate with most foreigners,because most of them speak English.And in our country ,English is one of the most important subjects.so I have to learn it well. Up to now ,my written English is just soso.and my English speaking is not good. so I hope someone can help me .In addition ,I want to know more about western countries.

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Hi Sherry,
Here is a correction of your notebook entry. Good job! My comments are in blue and corrections are in red.

I am Sherry. I want to learn English well and practice (practise is fine if you're using British or Canadian English, but American English spells "practice" with a c instead of an s) my English speaking so that I can communicate with most foreigners because most of them speak English. ~~And~~ (Avoid starting sentences with "and" or "but") In our country, English is one of the most important subjects, so I have to learn it well.
Up to now, my written English is just soso, and my English speaking is not good.
so I hope someone can help me. In addition, I want to know more about western countries.

Remember that the space comes after the punctuation, not before it. Instead of
" In addition ,I want to..."
it should be
"In addition, I want to..."

By the way, I'd say your written English is better than "soso." This was a very well-written entry.

\(^o^)/~看看你啊！！！我们家的Sherry!

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