My First Posting
This is my first posting.
So I would like to introduce myself a little.
I am a Japanese who lives in Kyoto, Japan.
I like traveling.
Traveling enlarges the mind.
And I like to take a photo in foreign country.
Never-seen-before view of photo taken by me is my treasure:)
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My First Posting
This is my first posting, so I would like to introduce myself a little.
I am Japanese and live in Kyoto, Japan.
I like traveling.
Traveling enlarges the mind.
Also, I like to take photos in foreign countries.
Never-seen-before view of photo taken by me is my treasure:)
Well done! This post is mostly correct. However, I don't understand the last sentence. Could you write it again? Also, "Japanese" is an adjective.
よくやった！この文章はほとんど正しいですが最終分を分かりません。最終分をまた書いてみてください。それも「Japanese」は形容詞です。頑張って！
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My First Posting
This is my first posting.
So I would like to introduce myself a little.
I am a Japanese who lives in Kyoto, Japan.
I like traveling.
Traveling enlarges the mind.
Also, I like to take photos in foreign countries.
Never-seen-before view of photo taken by me is my treasure:)
[Good start. Usually, you don't want to start a sentence with 'and'. If usually doesn't fit and should be used to connect two independent phrases in one sentence.]
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Hi xarmanla,
Thank you for your polite corrections.
When I could not come with suitable expression, I often used joining words with hyphen.
From now on, I heed your advice. I refer to a dictionary.
The same can be said for other corrections.
These are useful for me.
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I would have written that this is the first entry in my notebook. I reserve the word "post" for physical mailings or situations where I am at my specific "post". I am at my post when I am a timer at an event or when I am posted to greet people at a conference.
You are Japanese and you live in Kyoto, Japan.
Joining words with hyphen is an accepted practice, but the usual order is "never-before-seen". Using such a construct in your sentence is awkward. (That is a self-referential word).
I also dislike the so called "smiley". Its use can be traced at least as far back as telegrams and ham radio number codes. They may have had a use then when bandwidth was limited, but they are not good form.
A photograph I took in a foreign country (which one?) is my prized possession.
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Hi,Chen.Thank you for your comment!
OK, I will follow your account.
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