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Brazilian's Movement Hi everybody! How are you? I'm fine, actually I'm very happy. Somebody can ask me why and I'll explain. A week ago, brazilian started a movement. This happened because our politicians embezzle a lot of public money. We are among the highest paying tributes Country in the World and instead of this money go to health, education, public transport etc, with this money family's politicians travel oh the world, buy imported cars, buy farms etc. Our citizen are dying for lack doctor, lack of food (...). So I'm really happy, because my country "woke up"...we are expressing about our rights. This is a pacific movement! You can tell me ... "I saw many people loot and wreck public place" and i tell you this people aren't protesters..they are holigans and looters who is enjoying this moment..somebody believes that this people were infiltrating by the government. On Thursday we've been more than 1 million of peolple in street of the Rio de Janeiro. I'm so glad. I hope for a new Brazil, This new Brazil will be knowing because the quality of education, development, quality of hospital etc ..and not because the soccer, samba, carnaval, drugs and prostitution!!!

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Brazil's Movement

Hi everybody! How are you? I'm fine, actually, I'm very happy. Somebody can If you ask me why, and I'll explain. A week ago, we Brazilians started a movement. This happened because our politicians have embezzled a lot of public money. We are among the highest paying tributes Country in the World (rephrase, maybe to "We pay some of the highest taxes in the world") and instead of this our money going to public health, education, or transportation etc, with this money family's politicians are using it to travel oh the world, and buy imported cars, buy farms, and etc other personal expenses. Our citizens are dying for suffering due to the lack of doctors, lack and even of food (...). So I'm really happy, because my country "woke up." We are expressing about our rights. This is a pacific peaceful movement! You can tell me, "I saw many people loot and wreck public place" and i will tell you that these people aren't protesters..they are hooligans and looters who is enjoying are taking advantage of this moment..somebody believes that this people were infiltrating by the government. On Thursday we've been more than 1 million of peolple in street of the Rio de Janeiro. I'm so glad. I hope for a new Brazil, that this new Brazil will be knowing because be known for its quality of education, development, and quality of hospital healthcare etc ..and not because the only for soccer, samba, carnaval, drugs and prostitution!!!

 

Wow, what an interesting post! Thanks so much for sharing your insights. I also hope that Brazil will someday be known for much more than sports and its current political troubles.

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